Comments on: Blood of the Narlack

By: Top Ten Offworlders Posts for 2015 | Offworlders

Top Ten Offworlders Posts for 2015 | Offworlders — Wed, 30 Dec 2015 21:40:11 +0000

[…] the urban landscape, surpassing heroin and other physical addictions. My Sci-Fi web serial “Blood of the Narlack” made the number four position. I am very proud of this placement for 2015. This story is, in […]

By: David Nadas

David Nadas — Sun, 30 Aug 2015 16:03:07 +0000

I love the concept of a publisher of Sci-Fi as the protagonist and idea–different and one we all live for. I had to read this a few times to connect the dots, but once i did, I found the cadance and enjoyed the storyline. I am continuing my read through Parts 2 & 3.

By: Blood of the Narlack Sci-Fi Web Serial Part 2 | Offworlders

Blood of the Narlack Sci-Fi Web Serial Part 2 | Offworlders — Wed, 05 Aug 2015 20:22:16 +0000

[…] Continued from Blood of the Narlack: Part 1 […]

By: Kyle Pollard

Kyle Pollard — Mon, 03 Aug 2015 13:19:45 +0000

Hi Kahl. Thanks for the comments! By Repeat, do you mean the text that begins with “The narlacks started their existence as pure code”? That is in their to grab a reader’s attention. Commonly used in magazine articles. If you think it actually adds to confusion I will consider removing it, Not sure what you mean by “where’s the Rey of it?” I will be revising this series, even parts that I have already published, so your comments really help! Looking to publish Part 2 by Wednesday…

By: Kahl Rhoam

Kahl Rhoam — Mon, 03 Aug 2015 06:36:41 +0000

Aloha; overall concept intriguing.
The repeat was odd.
Confusing passage about the beetles.
Explain why insect life is the most possible evolution that can get up & walk.
But overall good & where’s the fucking Rey of it?
Thx!